“The co-accused of a rapist who allegedly conspired with other men to drug and sexually abuse his wife can be named for the first time after reporting restrictions were lifted.”
I used to read a lot of crime and horror novels in my teens. I thought I’d heard it all but the pit of depravity seems to be bottomless. I’m so shocked and disgusted by the perpetrators and horrified for the victims.
Good grief that title is horrendous.
“The co-accused of a rapist who allegedly conspired with other men to drug and sexually abuse his wife can be named for the first time after reporting restrictions were lifted.”
I used to read a lot of crime and horror novels in my teens. I thought I’d heard it all but the pit of depravity seems to be bottomless. I’m so shocked and disgusted by the perpetrators and horrified for the victims.
What is wrong with the title? It conveys the same information as your version with significantly fewer words.
The title as is can be read (and is how I read it) as “men who allegedly helped ‘rapist drug’ and ‘abuse wife’ (a-byoos, not ah-byouse) can be named”